Practice for Intermediate Learners of English: April 2019

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Valery

In my opinion you don't need amulets for have luck because if you are a good person and also you always do good things , life will return that and that is luck the prize for the good actions.

The last lucky day that I had was when I had 14.

One day I lost my money so I can't go to my house . While I was trying to call my sister for help I found a wallet with 28 soles so I can go to my house with this money because no one ask for it and also I really needed the money for return to my house furthemore, I can buy some Candies for enjoy the lucky moment that was an awesome and lucky

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Neryeling Santana I11

MY LUCK DAY
I have never been a person who believes in luck or amulets, but recently a set of events changed my mind.
Last month I found a rabbit leg in my house, which belonged to my grandfather, according to my sister the rabbit legs give you the luck you need. So I decided to try it, for several days nothing amazing happened
One day I was walking with my friends from school, since we had decided to meet again. And when I was walking I felt that I had stepped on something. It was a brown wallet, we were surprised because when I opened it I had a thousand suns. My friends wanted to take the money because they wanted to buy something. I did not agree because inside the wallet was the owner's ID and we could return the wallet.
In the end, as we did not know what to do with the money, we thought that the best thing was for me to take it with me while we thought about what to do with the money. When I was returning to my house I went through a park and on a bench sat a man identical to the ID picture. I approached and after verifying that they were the same person, I handed over the wallet. And as a reward, he gave me 100 soles.
That day I felt that I did the right thing because I was honest, besides I was a person with too much luck.

WRITING N° 1 - SECOND CHANCE (EVA VARGAS)

We need CCTV cameras everywhere. They are a very successful crime deterrent. Preventing crime and catching criminals is all that matters.
I'm completely agree that we need CCTV cameras everywhere because in the last years the crime has increasing, people are used to being victims of crime.
Criminals walk on the street without fear of being arrested by the authorities but, What is happening in our society? ... If we want our society to change we have to start with ourselves.. We've invested a lot of money to improve our society but everyday is worse in many aspects, specially in crime and vandalism. There's now a full range of different crimes taking place in Peruvian streets, and this is too bad for all the citizens and the future generations. In fact, Peruvian police think that we need to search a solution for these crimes because a lot of people commit crimes but we can't recognize them because there is no a clear evidence or witnesses, and putting CCTV cameras could be a solution.
In addition we have to be responsible in the moment that we choose our authorities.
I'm really sorry to hear that every day the crime increases and we are idle.
It has a lot to do with the education at home. People leave values aside and so that the crime is reduced we have to take precautions like placing CCTV cameras everywhere.
Also at the school, I think that the state should invest more money in education, since that is where the majority of young people spend the most time of the day.
There are many cases in which these CCTV cameras are very useful, but the government have to put more of them in all the places because people can´t walk quietly in the streets without the fear of being victims of dangerous criminals.

If we had these CCTV cameras everywhere criminals would be captured immediately and all people would live in a peaceful way.

Thanks.

Eva Vargas - Writing 2

Well, in my opinion the luck is not exist, but when I was a child I remember that one day I was playing with my father in Tupac park, it was very late, but I wanted to keep playing. Suddenly I went to the street and I saw a wallet. I felt very nervous because my father told me that some kidnappers used this method to kidnap children, but I decided to take the wallet and ran to my father, for me It was very funny.

Later, I told to my father about this experience and he tried to ask some persons to return the wallet, nobody was the owner of the wallet, so my father decided to see how much money was in the wallet. we was surprised because there was five hundred soles. I don't know if this was a lucky event, but with the money I bought a new cell phone and more things.

W1 Correction Lucero Chucos Cahuaya

In my opinion, if we want to share something in the cybernetic space, we need to think what consequences it would have because it could damage the integrity of a person, forma example, in social media we have a lot of cases when teenegers share photos about their friends for joke, but it would damage him or her not only with coments.It might have more consequences like bullying in the future.

If the authorities might had invented more laws about technology in our country, we wouldn't be disapointed about people who had a bad experience on internet. Bear in mind, if only the people who use the technology have more careful about how they can use it, we hadn't worried about this.

In addition, if you want to share information and recieve, you must to know about the content because the information for example a virtual book would have a virus and damage your computer, cellphone and other.

So there are actually a lot of us until now hadn't learned how to use technology.

In conclusion, first we need to know how to use the technology and we wouldn't have problems.

W1 Correction

In my opinion, if we want to share something in the cybernetic space, we need to think what consequences it would have because it could damage the integrity of a person, for example, in social media we have a lot of cases when teenegers share photos about their friends for joke, but it would damage him or her not only with coments.It might have more consequences like bullying in the future.

So there are actually a lot of us until now hadn't learned how to use technology.

In conclusion, first we need to know how to use the technology and we wouldn't have problems.

WRITING N°2_MILAGROS LOPEZ

A STROKE OF LUCK

I'm not sure if in fact luck exists, but some events are the most unexpected and unreasonable that they have been happened. For example, finding money on the streets or a device such as cellphones on a taxi.

Usually I don't consider me a lucky person, however there has been cases in which I had a stroke of luck. Not exactly, I found a cellphone or money, instead that, my debt to the bank disappeared magically.

Well it was a debt for using my credit card in some stores like Plaza vea and oechsle, especially for having shopped at Oechsle.Yes, I know, I will should use a credit card just for shopping things that worth it. But sometimes, for women, it's a little difficult don't waste money on clothes.

Continuing with my story, two months ago, when I went to the bank to pay my debt, the cashier told me that I did not have any debt to the bank. I could not believe it! To my surprise, that was not all. He also told me that the bank owed me money for previous purchases.

Therefore, I had a credit balance on my card for future purchases. I'm not sure if it was a stroke of luck or just happened by chance, but with that new credit balance I purchased many necessary things for my family.

Writing N°2

Well, It happened 8 years ago when i was studying at school. It was a Thursday at 7am at the morning, when i was walking and incidently I found 100 soles lying on the floor. In that moment I felt very happy and excited because I had never seen money lying on the floor so it was a new event in my life. I took the money and put it in my pocket but in that moment I remember when my mother told me that I have to be honest, so I asked to my teacher if she now who is the owner of this money. She told me: Angelo! Yes, I know who is the owner of this money, yesterday the school have a meeting and after finished te meeting a mother called an ask if we had seen money in the classroom so I think she is the owner of the money. Well that was her opinion. I think she lied because she was nervous. I usually dont have lucky events for example in this oportunity I win and I losed the money

writing N° 2 - Fernando Yupanqui

Personally, I think you make your fate and luck comes from the good or bad decisions you made in your life.

well, two years ago I had a stroke of luck and a terrible experience, it turns out that my dad and me had to go to Lima and take another bus to travel to Arequipa on vacations. I usually travel in the mornings but that day we had to go at night and when we were in the bus station my father bought tickets to go on the first floor and as there were no seats occupied we chose the first line and i sat next to the window. I hardly ever sleep every time I travel at night, so i was awake when we were near San Mateo and in a very narrow curve our bus crashed slightly with a truck and for my luck the crash was a seat behind me. Unfortunately there were some passengers injured but i left without any injury from that crash. We were stranded almost three hours and that day was my lucky day.

W2 ~Michelle

I didn't believe in luck, I thought it was people's superstitions, but after that day my opinion about luck change completely.

It happened two years ago my family and I went to Huaycha, I brought my pet called "chico" because I wanted to play with him, but when I started to play with my sister I distracted, and the trap came off and "chico" ran to the road because he saw a dog crossing the road, when I realized that "chico" was running to a dog the only thing I did was run after him, unfortunately, at the same time a truck was going to pass over there. However, when "chico" saw the truck he stopped the middle of the road, the truck passed with the sound of the horn at that moment my mom tell me Dont Look!. My family and me though that he died, after a few seconds, when I open my eyes I couldn't believe it! "Chico" was there although petrified he was alive! On the other hand, you will ask, how he survived? Well, fortunately, he survived because he was in the space under the car in which there aren't wheels, one more centimeter and he would not have survived.

Writing N°2/ I11/ Angel Quispe

A STROKE OF LUCK

I don't usually believe in luck, I think that success and prosperity don't need it; it's just taking the chance and do the best. However, there are times where something unexpected happens. It was my case the last year, I took a taxi to go to the university because I was late and I was in hurry, I didn't even check how much money I had, wich was a terrible mistake. When I was near, I decided to pay, but there was nothing in my wallet.

The thing that made me get in despair was the driver's mood. He seemed getting more and more angry. So, I accidentally put my hand on the seat, and guess what?

I found exactly the amount of money that I had to pay! I couldn't believe that.

Then, I got down when someone called me to tell me that the classes were canceled for that day, but that's another story.

Anyway, there's no doubt that my luckiest moment I have ever had was finding money when I needed.

WRITING N2 LUCERO TACZA HUARINGA

I would tell you about a lucky event I had.

First of all, I usually believe in luck, I think that luck doesn't occur by chance I mean that you could have good or bad luck depend of the actions you did in the past.

I was having bad luck in many things I thought that I ran out of luck but it changed.

All started one night, I was doing my homework of science, I had to write a report about it. I was really tired, and I needed to present it the next day. What causes me the most stress is doing a lot of homework.

You will be saying, it happened to me for doing things at the last minute, and you have the reason but it happened because I had other activities to do, so I was busy.

Continuing with my story, I was finishing my report when I fell asleep. The next day I woke up at 7:30 and didn't have time to finish my homework so I had the idea of finishing it at school.

I needed to have breakfast, but I usually make it by myself. I didn't have time to make breakfast too. So I just went to kitchen to have some water and I saw my breakfast served at the table. I was happy because someone made breakfast for me.

Then I left home hurried to take the bus. I was waiting for the bus when I realized that I didn't have money. I was about going back to my house when my cousin appeared by chance, he told me that he could take me to the school in his car.

Thanks to him, I didn't arrive late at school, but I forgot that I had to present my homework at 8:20, so I didn't have time to finish it.

Fortunately, the teacher didn't come to class because he was sick. I was really happy!!! I had good luck in everything.

Finally, when I was returning at home, I ran into my aunt, we were glad to see each other after lot of months, so we went to a nice restaurant, the food was great and she gave me some money to buy anything I wanted.

It was a stroke of luck because I wanted to buy a pair of sneakers and thanks to the money I received I could buy them!!!

So, what can I say? It was a day of good luck and fortune. When I thought that everything was going to go wrong, I mean that everything would be a failure all of them turned into success.

I had good luck to overcome the problems!!!

In conclusion if you are having problems, don't worry so much, good luck can help you.

The more positive and motivated you are, the more successful you will be!

Carole Estefany Ñahui

First of all, I think that lucky people are the ones who make the right decisions and in that way change their destiny or prevent something bad from happening to them.

Well, I don't consider myself a lucky person, on the contrary I think I've run out of luck. No matter how much I buy lucky charms, I don't think my luck is going to change. When I want to avoid meeting a person, for some strange reason that person is everywhere I go. But it's not all bad because sometimes I get strokes of luck . Two days ago I was at school when my tutor approached me and asked me if I wanted to apply to Catolica University, I said yes, but in reality I had not thought of applying to Catolica University because I had other universities in mind. I was confused because I didn't know the reason for the question, 5 minutes later the tutor called me and my three classmates, when we arrived at the tutor's desk, we saw four pieces of paper and she told us that each of us had to choose a piece of paper. When I opened the paper that I chose, it said ''YES'', then the tutor told me that I am going to give the simulation of the Catolica university admission exam. At that time I was very happy because taking that exam is a good opportunity to know my academic level and apart from that they were giving me the opportunity to take that exam totally free and that's good because that exam is more expensive than other exams.

I'm very excited, I want to take the exam

W2 Lucero Chucos Cahuaya

All happen when I was a child. I had aproximately ten years old and I had gone to my uncle's house with my mom, we were

walking in the corner near to my house when

we had a stroke of luck. She stopped and said me: Look! A bill! I dind't believe her because she always make me a jockes and we picked up the bill suddenly we realized that it was two hundred soles. My mom said that one of our neighbors might had falled out the bill after that we ask if one of the neighbors might had been the owner but anyone said it.

My mom usually said me that she always runs out of luck but that day it change.

The next day we went to the cinema, ate, in fact we enjoy the money.

It was the best story of lucky that I have had, and If I had the oportunity to know the person who is the owner I would say thanks

and sorry because my mom and I spend and enjoy the money without work, only lucky.

I wish I had more oportunities like that.

In my opinion the thing that causes like is the time because in my case other person could had found it.

WRITING N°2 - Sthefany Lazo Miranda - I11

THE LUCKY EVENT

During many years, I hadn't had good luck. I usually have had many failures. People say "You create your fate", but I think that I born with a certain destiny because whatever I did, bad luck never left me.

A day like any other, I was walking with my best friend and she gave me a gift. It was a special bracelet called "Huayruro". She told me that a if I wore it, my luck would improve. Certainly, the next day I had many chances instead of failures. I spend time with my family and we enjoyed it a lot, because we almost never spend time with them because of their jobs. I didn't find much wealth, but I found 10 soles in the pocket of one of my jacket. At the end, it was just a stroke of luck because the next day all my bad luck came back.

In my opinion, if you were born with bad luck, despite what you do it won't change.

Whatever, good luck !

WRITING N°2 - Sthefany Lazo Miranda - I11

THE LUCKY EVENT

In my opinion, if you were born with bad luck, despite what you do it won't change.

Whatever, good luck !

Writing N°2 - Doris Gabriel Galvez

I'm going to tell tell a short story about a lucky event, so let me begin with this. I hardly ever find something valuable on the street. I just found 10 cents on the street once. I do not have any kind of story like that. Nonetheless, I think that luck is in other things, too.

First, I did not believe much in luck because I always thought my luck has run out since I was a child. However, my concept of what luck is has changed through the years. Having luck is not just finding coins or something value on the street, winning prizes, getting good scores, etc. Having luck is meeting good friends and people who you can trust and count on during your life time. These people can help you in many ways. For example, I met someone who changed my way of thinking. I was lost emotionally, all the people I trusted just let me down, and I only wanted to end with everything since I did not know how to continue with all that. I thought I always had bad luck because only bad things happened to me. Since I met my best friend, he changed how I thought about life. He made me realized that life was beautiful, that not all the people are bad, that if you want to do something, you can really do it, and you can do great things with sacrifice and a lot of effort. These pieces of advice changed my life because, since that time, I tried to be a better person, I strived in my studies and all the things that I was doing.

To conclude, the luck is not only in valuable things you can find, luck is in the people you can meet thought your life, too.

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Writing N2 - Luis Fernando Canez Cordova

Well I had a stroke of luck when I was 10 years old. When I was in the first grade , all of my friend invited me to a party . Well ,i didn't want to go because a i was preparing for a very important swimming competition and i knew that if i went to the party i would have felt tired the next day. For this i rejected the invitation of my friends. The next day , i felt very nervous for my competition . If i had gone to the party , i would probably have been late to the competition but when i arrived to the competition , it was very early . At the door of the pool I looked at a piece of paper in the ground and I went to pick it up. That paper in the ground was 100 dolars!!!. I was very lucky because if i had gone to the party , i wouldn´t found the money.

Writing N1- Luis Fernado Canez Cordova

I´m going to give my opinion to the first comment.

For my opinion is an excellent idea .Our city needs more CCTV cameras to be able to catch all the people who commit crimes and they are still free.

We all know in a lot of countries especially at night are very dangerous. We are going to focus on Peru- Lima .Nobody is safe walking in the streets at night ,for example ,in a desolate place or without security .In places like these, many crimes such as robbing, kidnapping and murders are committed . Many criminals are in the streets, because the police didn´t have a video , photo or the investigation was stopped for the lack of data.

If only the president put more CCTV cameras in our country .I think that the crime will stop , and people could live safety . If we had had more CCTV cameras , many crimes would have been avoided in our streets.

CCTV cameras would be very useful in many cases .People could walk more quietly in the streets and criminals would be captured very quickly by the videos .We have a lot of technology in our country and in all countries in the world .

The crime is in the top of lists of priority of countries , because the welfare and safety of people comes first.

Writing N°2 Jimena Calderón Habich

Lucky Event

I like to walk around the streets to go to different places in Huancayo because I think that walk is a good way to do exercise and be healthy in our society.

Well, one day I was walking on the street to go to my academy when I saw a ladybug walking in my hand so, I was surprised about it. Then, I was thinking about that, when I found one thousand soles in the middle of the street and I picked up the money, I asked some people who were in that place If the money belonged to them, but nobody said anything so, I kept the money, I put the money on my wallet and I returned to my house very exciting about that.

I think that the ladybug gave me luck that day and it was a stroke of luck!

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Writing 2- Ania Cayetano

When I was 8 years old I had a stroke of luck in a somewhat unexpected situation.

At that time, when I saw my cartoons on tv, they would always broadcast a cable company ad with Japanese characters who sang the promotions of that company and I learned the song and at the same time they became my favorite characters. After four months, this company held an event in which these characters would come to give a special show and to be able to attend had to conduct an online survey. I told my mom about this and she helped me do this survey. Honestly, we didn't know anything about these characters, except for the song in the ad. We answered the best we could and sent the survey to the company. I think it was the work of fate since, a week later, my mother was called from the company announcing that we had won three passes for the event and that we were the first to guess all the questions asked in the survey. My mother, surprised, told me the news also said: "this is a stroke of luck daughter and the thing that surprises me is that you are only a girl of 8 years!" My mom hugged me and we were happy to break the news to my dad.

Finally, I went with my dad to the event and being the first to correctly guess all the questions, the company did an interview about how we knew these characters and I told them: "What I really like is listening the song of the Japanese" and the interviewers laughed together with my dad.

WRITING N2 TACZA HUARINGA LUCERO INTERMEDIATE 11

I will tell you about a lucky event I had.

First of all, I usually believe in luck, I think that luck doesn't occur by chance I mean that you could have good or bad luck depend of the actions you did in the past.

I was having bad luck in many things I thought that I ran out of luck but it changed.

You will be saying, it happened to me for doing things at the last minute, and you have the reason but it happened because I had other activities to do, so I was busy.

Continuing with my story, I was finishing my report when I feel asleep. The next day I woke up at 7:30 and didn't have time to finish my homework so I had the idea of finishing it at school.

Thanks to him, I didn't arrive late at school, but I forgot that I had to present my homework at 8:20, so I didn't have time to finish it.

Fortunately, the teacher didn't come to class because he was sick. I was really happy!!! I had good luck in everything.

It was a stroke of luck because I wanted to buy a pair of sneakers and thanks to the money I received I could buy them!!!

So, what can I say? It was a day of good luck and fortune. When I thought that everything was going to go wrong, I mean that everything would be a failure all of them turned into success.

I had good luck to overcome the problems!!!

In conclusion if you are having problems, don't worry so much, good luck can help you.

The more positive and motivated you are, the more successful you will be!

writing N°1

Fernando Yupanqui

I´m totally agree with the first posted comment. We need CCTV cameras anywhere because it helps to capture the criminal's faces when they commit a crime and it is easy for the police to recognize them.

That reminds me about a news that happened two months ago when two men had entered a well-know jewelry store in Lima and they took jewels valued at one hundred thousand dollars. By the way, the thieves got disguised as old people, but fortunately the cameras helped the police to recognize and catch them.

So I think this kind of technology is very succesfull to prevent crime and catching

criminals and you can place it anywhere and see different

images at the same time.

Michelle

I couldn't agree with your comment more! We need CCTV cameras everywhere because if the crime happens and there is a camera recorded the crime, I'm absolutely certain that the video can be to catch the criminal and obviously you are going to get justice. In addition, the CCTV cameras help the police to prevent crimes and help citizens. So there are actually many criminals who have gone to jail for the videos of the cameras. For this reason, I think that CCTV cameras need to be everywhere to prevent future crimes.

Re: Valery actual

El El mié, 24 de abr. de 2019 a las 17:22, VALERY TOVAR <kavali112710@gmail.com> escribió:

I really agree with you becase if we add some cameras in huancayo we could have a city safer.
Cctv cameras can help us in lot of things :

first ,criminals would be sacare and as a consequance they will stop stealing .

Second, we will know the way that they act so we can found the way to avoid it.

Third , we will know they tracks and we can catch then but only if we work hard.

As you said we can prevent the crime and also we can stop the crime but ccvt cameras are just the first step to overcome crime .

Nowadays we have to do something to overcome crime because if huancayo still suffering crime all of us will be affected.

Joseph

I agree with you because now we have many problems and usually the authorities of today do not believe us when we try to denounce something or someone that is the reason why we need more security cameras around the city. Many people believe that it is expensive but in fact it is cheap but I believe that the state does not want to offer us those cameras. The security cameras are a tool that helps prevent and fight crime, as well as crime investigation.

For example three years ago my aunt was robbed the bank more than 5000 soles but there were no cameras there then the bank did not want to give her money because they said that anyone could say that, then my aunt was angry and lost all her money . That is the reason why we need those cameras, because a criminal would not be able to steal you knowing that there is a camera watching him.

Eva Vargas

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We need CCTV cameras everywhere. They are a very successful crime deterrent. Preventing crime and catching criminals is all that matters.
I'm completely agree that we need CCTV cameras everywhere because in the last years the crime has increasing, people are used to being victims of crime.
Criminals walk on the street without fear of being arrested by the authorities but, What is happening in our society? ... If we want our society to change we have to start with ourselves.
In addition we have to be responsible in the moment that we choose our authorities.
I'm really sorry to hear that every day the crime increases and we are idle.
It has a lot to do with the education at home. People leave values aside and so that the crime is reduced we have to take precautions like placing CCTV cameras everywhere.
Also at the school, I think that the state should invest more money in education, since that is where the majority of young people spend the most time of the day.
Finally, we must all be participants in combating crime.

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I think it's a crime like many other ones, so they have to be punished. If they had started stolen her, they would continue doing it with other people. There's no question that it's difficult to find who was the person who committed this crime, but if we continued thinking the same as you, this crime wouldn't stop. I strongly believe that these are criminals, because in some way they are stealing the money which you invest buying this home or the beginnings . There are many professionals specialists in technology, so they can find a solution for this problem.

Valery

I really agree with you becase if we add some cameras in huancayo we could have a city safer.

Cctv cameras can help us in lot of things ,first criminal would be sacare and they will stop stealing .Second, we will know the way that they act so we can found the way to avoid it.third,we will know they tracks and we can catch then.

As you said we can prevent the crime and also we can stop the crime .

Nowadays huancayo's mayor will add some cctv cameras so huancayo will be a safer place

We need CCTV cameras everywhere. They are a very successful crime deterrent. Preventing crime and catching criminals is all that matters.

I am completely agree that we need CCTV cameras everywhere because in the last years the crime has incresing, people are used to being victims of crime.

Criminals walk on the street without fear of being arrested by the authorities but, What is happening in our society?

If we want our society to change we have to start with ourselves.

In addition we have to be more responsible in the moment that we choose our authorities.

I´m really sorry to hear that every day the crime increases and we are idle.

It has a lot to do with the education at home. People leave values aside and so that the crime is reduced we have to take precautions like placens CCTV camera everywhere.

In the oher hand, the state should invest more money in education and in young people spend more time in school and thatis where we have to start changing.

Finally, it is the obligation of all citizens for the security of our country.

THANKS

Sthefany Lazo

Michelle

I could'nt agree with your comment more! We need CCTV cameras everywhere,because if the crime happens and there is a camera recorded the crime,I'm absolutely certain that the video can be to catch the criminal and obviously you are going to get justice. In addition the CCTV cameras help the police to prevent crimes and help citizens. So there are actually many criminals who have gone to jail for the videos of this cameras.

Jared Portillo

In this case, I disagree with the comment, because the file sharing is very risky. Since the information it contains. It could reach people who could harm us.

Talking about file sharing, we don't know what the person with whom we share these files is.

By the way, technology helps us. And much more in these cases like file sharing. But this isn't very reliable. Sometimes, technology fails us and the files can reach the wrong hands.

All right then, these people could use these files, and with the information it contains, we can extort ourselves or do other things that harm us, and this would become a crime.

So, we must be aware and know what we are sharing and with whom.

COMMENT_MILAGROS LOPEZ

I couldn't agree with you more! Every day we can see in the news that many crimes, from less severe crime to agravated crime, happen all over the world. However, some crimes haven't been resolved yet because the victims couldn't recognize their aggressors or there was no evidence that the defendant had committed the crime. Therefore, there are still many criminals who get away with their felonies and continue committing crimes without fear of being punished.

If only there were many CCTVs on the streets, public places and others, many criminals could have been punished and not remained free.

In fact, there are cases in which CCTV cameras have helped to prevent crimes and catch criminals in many parts of the world. For example, on 23th April, 2013, Maryorie was 16 years old when she was brutally murdered by Angel Valdivia, who had treated her since she was a child. Fortunately, a CCTV camera could record the moment the crime happened. That's why, Angel Valdivia was found guilty of first-degree murder. The jury sentenced him to go to prison for 15 years.

There is no question that CCTV cameras are very successful crime deterrent. Constantly, they're used as a investigation tool to resolve any kind of crime and keep a control over criminals.

In addition, this device can make people feel more secure due to CCTV cameras keep an area under constant surveillance. I strongly believe that if the government established a strict surveillance using CCTV cameras, any crime would be deleted in our country.

Writing N° 1

Angelo

In my opinion, file sharing is not a crime in some cases. For example: Last week, I did my video project. Did my video project was too hard to me because I had never done a video before so I used an app called (MOVAVI video editor). MOVAVI is an app very easy to use but if you want to export the video you have to pay 20 dollars. What a problem! When I finished to do my video project, I uploaded the video to Facebook. This website sent me a message saying that they had silenced 1 minute of my video because my video contained copyright music. When I read that message I felt nervous and angry because Facebook could delete my video. This problem could be considered as an illegal file sharing but in this case I did not commit a crime because I just did my homework. It was not my intention to broke some rules so I am not a criminal. By the way, I think my video project is good and a little funny. On the other hand, the file sharing is considered a crime when a person use personal information to harm other people. For example: if a person get your personal information, he or she could make you part of a blackmail and call you to give them a lot of money. Before I forget, you have to be careful with your personal information or if Facebook try to delete your video.

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Angelo

In my opinion, file sharing is not a crime in some cases. For example: Last week, I did my video project. Did my video project was too hard to me because I had never done a video before so I used an App called Movavi. Movavi is very easy to use but if you want to export the video you have to pay 20 dollars. What a problem! When I finished to do my video project, I uploaded the video to Facebook. Talking about the video after 10 minutes to uploaded the video to Facebook. This website sent me a message saying that they had silenced 1 min of my video because my video contained copyright music. When I read this message I felt nervous and angry because Facebook could delete my video. This problem could be considered as an illegal file sharing but in this case I did not commit a crime because I just did my homework. It was not my intention to broke some rules so I am not a criminal. By the way I think my video project is good and a little funny. On the other hand, the file sharing is considered a crime when a person use personal information to harm other people. For example If a person get your personal información, he or she could make you part of a blackmail and call you to give them a lot of money. Before I forget, you have to be careful with your personal information or if facebook try to delete your video. Posted by Angelo(I11

In my opinion, file sharing is not a crime in some cases. For example: Last week, I did my video project. Did my video project was too hard to me because I had never done a video before so I used an App called Movavi. Movavi is very easy to use but if you

Writing N° 1/ I11/ Angel Quispe

Responding to: "We need CCTV cameras everywhere. They're a very succesful crime deterrent. Preventing crime and catching criminals is all that matters."

Absolutely! I couldn't agree with you more! I feel really thankful about the development of technology. Now, we can prevent more cases of arson, burglary, kidnapping, shoplifiting, looting, etc.

By the way, it´s easier to identify criminals than in the past because the quality of these cameras are improving day by day, so the police's work is more efficient and they can catch the criminals quickly.

And, of course, the use of CCTV cameras has more advantages. One of them is that the recordings can serve as evidence against the guilty of any crime. In addition, you could use these cameras to check what's going on with your employees if you had a company. Alright then, the best part is that CCTV cameras are not expensive, wich means everbody can get one.

I strongly believe that If these kind of cameras had been devised many years ago, we would enjoy a better place to live. I wish I saw that place soon.

Writing N°1/ I11

Responding to: "We need CCTV cameras everywhere. They're a very succesful crime deterrent. Preventing crime and catching criminals is all that matters."

Absolutely! I couldn't agree with you more! I feel really thankful about the development of technology. Now, we can prevent more cases of arson, burglary, kidnapping, shoplifiting, looting, etc.

I strongly believe that If these kind of cameras had been devised many years ago, we would enjoy a better place to live. I wish I saw that place soon.

In my opinion, file sharing is not a crime in some cases. For example: last week, I did my video project and I uploaded the video to Facebook, after 10 minutes. Facebook sent me a message saying that they had silenced 1 min of my video because my video co

Lucero Chucos Cahuaya

In my opinion if we want to share something in the cybernetic space, we need to think what consequences it would have because it could damage the integrity of a person for example in social media we had a lot cases when teenegers share photos about their friends for a joke but it would damage him or her not only with coments.It might have more consequences like bullying in the future.

If the authorities had invented more laws about tecnology in our country, we wouldn't be disapointed about people who had a bad experience in the internet in the other hand if only the people who use the tecnology could have more careful for how use and we hadn't worried about this.

In addition if you want to share information and recieve ,you must to know about the content because the information for example a virtual book would have a virus and damage your computer, celphone, tablet and other.

So there are actually a lot of us hadn't known how use the tecnology and use it.

In conclusion first we need to know how use the tecnology and we wouldn't have problems.

gabriel galvez doris

We need CCTV cameras everywhere. They're a very successful crime deterrent.

Preventingcrime and catching criminals is all that matter.

I completely agree that we need CCTV cameras everywhere because in the last years the security has decreased, the streets aren't safe anymore and some people walk afraid of something could happen with them. They think that they might be stolen or killed. I mean in our country there are a lot of insecurity. There are a lot of murders, thieves, kidnappers, burglary and vandalism. The government should invest more money on security, and CCTV cameras can be very useful to identify criminals.

That reminds me that one day I was on Ferrrocarril street. I was going back to my home. It was at 9:00 pm, and someone had stolen my cellphone and my wallet. By the time I realized that I was stolen, I tried to locate the thieves; however, there wasn't anybody. The thieves have already escaped. If there had been CCTV cameras, they could have filmed the action, the police could have identified the thieves easily, and they might have arrested them.

Changing the subject, we should install CCTV cameras, so we could prevent a lot of crimes and put criminal into behind bars. Talking about security everyone should have CCTV cameras in their houses, companies, everywhere by law, so we can avoid deaths, robs and another kind of crimes.

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Carole Estefany Ñahui Quispe

I couldn´t agree with you more when you say that they stole you.

They found a different and modern way to steal, because they know that nowadays many people, especially teenagers, play video games. The goal of many teenagers is to be the best in video games and for that they "buy" objects that are going to help them, even when these objects are expensive. By the way, I would like to tell you what happened to my cousin, his name is Hugo. Hugo is a fan of video games. He decided to buy a package of "pearls" because they were on sale, Hugo paid the full amount but only received half the package of pearls.

Before I forget, I would like to give you some advice so that you can avoid this type of theft. First, you have to understand that it's just a game and you can't be wasting your money on unnecessary things like virtual objects for a video game, because that can affect your real life. Second, before you buy a virtual object, you have to inform yourself for example you should read comments from other users. In addition, you have to be very careful with your virtual belongings, because it's unfair that you've paid a lot of money to get that and suddenly a gang of animated characters to steal you. Talking about take care of your belongings, How do you keep your valuables?

Changing the subject, do you consider yourself a lucky person in video games?

Jimena Calderón Habich

I couldn't agree with you more. First of all, I think that our society really need CCTV cameras everywhere because we live in a place where people commit a lot of crimes. We've invested a lot of money to improve our society but everyday is worse in many aspects, specially in crime and vandalism. There's now a full range of different crimes taking place in Peruvian streets, and this is too bad for all the citizens and the future generations. In fact, Peruvian police think that we need to search a solution for these crimes because a lot of people commit crimes but we can't recognize them because there is no a clear evidence or witnesses, and putting CCTV cameras could be a solution.

And, of course, CCTV cameras could help us to find criminals, give them a punishment and put them behind bars. These cameras could prevent crime in different ways because If people saw the CCTV cameras on the street, they wouldn't want to commit a crime and we can improve our society giving them a good punishment. There's no a question that CCTV cameras would be our solution to protect all the Peruvian citizens. In addition, these cameras are a technological advance, which will not only take care of our streets of people who want to hurt others and take the easy way to have things without paying for them. I strongly believe that these CCTV cameras are our possible solution.

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I'm really agree with you, because in the last days the vandalism and delinquency has increased, the strategies to carry out an assault every day improve, and thieves become more adept at deceiving people. So if we start use CCTV cameras we could find the responsible of the mugging, murder or arson with more easily, and people culd feel more safer.

We need to start defendence ourselves against the delinquency with the help of the technology. How you say its a good way to prevent the crime and catching criminals. I'm absoluty certain that use cameras might help reduce the crime rate, and the adults or teenagers would look for a good job.

Another benefit of the moderm segurity cameras is that can connect with local agencies, such as the police, and share images or videos in real time, and it would make the capture of the thief faster. Another positive point is that are 100 percent reliable even though they usually need someone to use or monitor them.

In addition the people who use this cameras they claim that they are too useful and effective, It's incredible to believe that a machine win a policeman in terms of caring for the safety of the population.
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