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Writing 1 (William Aguilar Paucar)

                                                                                                                    1083 Real Avenue
                                                                                                                    Huancayo City, PA03921
                                                                                                                    October 05, 2017
Dear Editor:

I would like to comment the article called "All My Life For Sale", which appeared in a newspaper I read. I am a little confused with the conclusion of the article:

In my opinion, the article is very realistic, It's one of some things that happen in the life, Someone sells their stuff to get money in an easy way. The article teaches us the real value of the things that we have. We have to love all our belongings. I totally agree with that idea.

Also, the author wrote a lot of adventures about their things that he sold and he shared them in a web-site called "Temporama.com". I think it's not necessary to do. I believe he did it to become a famous person on the Internet, or he wanted to know new people or he expected to get some extra money with their posts, so I strongly disagree with that action.

I hope that my letter is received and read by you, and that you take my opinions into consideration to improve the next article you will write soon.

Your sincerely,

William Aguilar



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