Ligia Fatima
Writing 2
I remember that once My family and I prepared to go to cochas. when we arrived we started to prepare everything to eat and go to explore the place but ten minutes after it started to hail and the food plates were filled with hail so we had to use the car awning to try to cover the rain but still So we ended up very wet and since we did not have spare clothes we had to be wet until we returned to our house. The final result of the whole experience is that my whole family got sick.
Improve punctuation.
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