Writing 3

There are several why the cemetery is my favorite place. First of all, that place has a beautiful sculptures. In addition it has a big green areas, so it smell's good. Finally it has a different spaces where you can thinking alone whitout noise, this is a peaceful place.

Writing 2 - Lorena Huamani

Embedded in a person's skin an RFID has advantages and disadvantages. One advantage is that you can know where a person is, and you can also protect him or her.

Another benefit is that you can know if that person is lying you about where he or she is.

There are also disadvantages to being embedded under a person's skin. That chip can infect the skin of that person. Another drawback is that can spouse the privacy life of these people, so they could feel uncomfortable.

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2018-07-19 16:53 GMT-05:00 Samira Rosso <luceronice11@gmail.com>:

2018-07-19 16:07 GMT-05:00 Samira Rosso <luceronice11@gmail.com>:

Use RFID chips for people has some advantages and disadvantages. 

One advantage is that parents will be less worried about their children because they know where they are. Another benefit is when you would like to give a surprise to someone else, it is easier to find him or her, and if it were the case that some relative of yours was traveling and you are worried about this device you can locate it

there are also disadvantages to using RFID chips in people because will be the case that the chip embeds in the walls of your skin also in the same way you do not respect the own space of the person, the worst of all would be that this person finds out that you entered something into his body which is not known if it is completely safe and end up winning you a lawsuit

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w3 Jennifer Rojas

There several reason why my bedroom is my favorite place. First of all I love my bed. I think is confortable and hot.  It is also wide and I always feel in the comfort of moving without falling. In addition I feel so happy and active when I listen music on my stereo. I feel like a free soul. I listen my favorite songs and I dance all. Another reason is the color. The walls are painted of my favorite colors, ligh blue and blue. I find peace in those colors, I feel like in the clouds. Also the sofa is confortable and I can put all my clothes. The floor is a very comfortable material, I don't feel cold at night and I can walk barefoot. Finally the windows are large and provide a lot of light in the morning. I love my bedroom.

Writing 3- Intermediate 5- Romero Asparrín Oscar Nicolas

  There are several reasons why my bedroom is my favorite place. First of all, my bedroom have a big computer for study, chat and watch a lot of videos. Normally, I'm doing my homework of my school for 3 hours so that I don't go out of my bedroom. Another reason is that the color light blue of the walls combine with the color white and black of my furniture and create a peaceful space so that I can relax and enjoy listening music there. In addition, my bedroom is next to my garden so, It smells to flowers. Finally, my bedroom is on the fourth floor. I can see the park and the streets by my window whenever I'm at home.

Writig 2- Intermediate 5- Romero Asparrín Oscar Nicolas

Using RFID chips has advantages and disadvantages in our countries. One benefit is the police can embed it in criminals and improve the security. Also, It can guard the prisons better because the prisoners can't leave without being detected and will easily be found. There are also disadvantages, the RFID chips can infringe on privacy rights of the people. Another disadvantage is that in the general market, some organizations can obtain these products and use it for bad purposes like introducing these chips in people and then stealing their information.

Writing N°3

My favorite place is a room that is located on the second floor of my house. There are many reasons why that room is my favorite place. It is a quiet and relaxing place. There is a large window through which I can see the sunset and the sunrise. I can also see the rain, something I love. In that room, there is also a cassette player and an old record player. I found albums and tapes of my father. The majority is classical music and rock. There are some shade plants. It is also very exciting to be in that room because they say that weird things happen. In truth, I would like to see something, it would be a good memory.

Writing 1- Intermediate 5- Oscar Nicolas Romero Asparrín

When I was a child, I wanted to adopt a small dog. But, I didn't know anything about taking care of the animals. It was the start of our adventure.
First of all, I needed a new house for it, so I was all the day choosing a house and spent a lot of money. Later, when I installed this house in my yard. Finally, I bought a lot of food in almost 30 minutes. The next week my pet destroyed my favorite sofa while I was working. In the end, I was fond of my new pet, but I had a lot of problems with it.

Writing N°1

One month ago, my classmates and I agreed to go all together somewhere and not attend classes. We said that we would meet at the school door. When I got there, I found one of my classmates. Then they called me and told me they were in a passage in front of the school. I went to that passage and there was nobody. I only saw one construction. I went back to the door and I found more classmates. They called me again asking where I was and I said that at the door. They told me to go back to that passage and when I went I heard laughter. I found them hiding in that construction. We were 20! After finding them, we didn't know where to go. Suddenly, we hear someone told us: the school has to find out about this! We were scared and we went running to a place called "El Bosque". When we arrived there, I went with my best friend and left the others behind. Two days after happened this, the school coordinator sent a call to all those who had missed that day. They called everyone's parents and didn't let us enter the school to sign a commitment. After all that we haven't returned to agree to miss school. For fear that they will call our parents again. It seems that we have all learned not to do It again.

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W3 Max Uribe chucos 

There are several reasons why my bedroom is my favorito place. First of all my bedroom has planta and a Big Window. In the day It's always well-lit. It has a sofá where I can rest o take a nap. It's comfortable. 

Another reason is , In there I can study, listen to music, watch tv so, nobody can bother me. 

In addition, The wall's color for my is a fin color, It's light blue color. I fell more calm when I stay in there. I try to clean every day because I don't want It to be dirty. 

Finally, The lighting is perfect. There aren't mucho forniture. I have a big bed to relax. I didn't change my bedroom for another place. It's perfect to me. I like It a lot .

W3 - Danitza Salvatierra

there are several reasons why my bedroom is my favorite place. First of all my room has a small bookshelf because I love reading.

Another reason is that it has big window through which I can see a large part of my neighborhood.

In addition my room has a large desk where I can do my homework or read without anyone bothering me

Finally it has the green and black walls that are my favorite colors

W3 - Yoel Espinoza

There are several reasons why my bedroom is my favourite place. First of all, it has a comfortable bed where I can rest or spend time on my cellphone. Another reason is the color of my bedroom, it has two skyblue walls and the others are white and I feel good when I am there. In addition there are two white pillows that help me to be more relaxed while I am playing or watching videos on my laptop. Finally there is a desk where I can do all the homework that I might have and read books if it is possible.

W3 - Mayra Clemente

There are several reasons why my living room is my favorite place. First of all, the living room has comfortable sofas, so always I am there.

Another reason is that living room has a thick rug, so when I walk barefoot in this place I never feel cold.

In addition, there is a TV, where I can see movies with my family and spend a time together.

Finally, the living room has a familiar smell, so I can say I'm at home.

W3 - Victoria Mendoza

There are several reasons why my bedroom is my favorite place. First of all, my bedroom has a desk too big and I can work with a lot of space and energy.

Another reason is that  I have an electric outlet very close to my bed and is easy to connect my charger while I'm in bed and I'm on my cell phone this does that I feel so comfortable.

Finally, one thing that I love in my bedroom is my floor because always is clean and I can walk without shoes.  

WRITING 3 -JEAN CARLOS RUIZ ZAPATA

There are several reasons why Starbucks is my favorite place. First of all, Starbucks has very comfortable seating and furniture, and you can recline your body while you drink your coffee. Another reason is customer service, Starbucks employees are very friendly and always show a smile, also because all people come to drink coffee to talk, to enjoy that little moment, and that's how I feel at home and in peace. In addition, because there I met my girlfriend, and when I go there with her, I remember the endless talks we had and we still have. Finally, because I love Starbucks, the lights, the color of the wall, the furniture, the floor, the presentation of their products, I just love everything about Starbucks.

There are reasons why my room is the best place. First of all my room, it has a TV where I can play video games and watch movies without anyone bothering me. Another reason is that I have a computer where I can play but the bad thing is that if I use it for games I can only play weekends Another reason is that the windows have a view to the street and I save the electric light in the afternoon. Another reason is my bed because it is comfortable and very soft, on weekends I can sleep two hours more.

writing Nº2 -jean carlos ruiz zapata

I'LL NEVER FORGET the day that my sister and I, bought a dog at the Huancavelica fair. I always wanted a dog, so I could play with the dog, because whenever I played with my sister, we ended up fighting. It was the most beautiful day of my childhood, because I knew, I had a partner to play the first five months were happy…. and then everything, went wrong.
FIRST OF ALL, my family and all the dogs of my family went camping to the jungle. I was very excited, to play with all the dogs, everything was very nice, but when we returned to huancayo, my dog was no longer the same.
THE NEXT MORNING my dog had the tail down, and It didn't greet me as It always did, leaping and wagging Its tail. LATER my sister and I decided to take it to the vet, the vet checked It, and told us, that my dog didn't have much time, to live. He said that my dog would start having epilepsy attacks, but we didn't believe him.
THE NEXT DAY my dog started to have the attacks that the vet said, LATER we took it to vet, and he told us, that there is only waiting for it to die, and that the best thing we could do was to kill my dog with an injection, so It wouldn't feel any pain.
IN THE END we decided to do it, it was the most painful thing that I did until now.

TEACHER THIS IS MY WRITING N°2

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2018-07-19 16:07 GMT-05:00 Samira Rosso <luceronice11@gmail.com>:

Use RFID chips for people has some advantages and disadvantages. 

One advantage is that parents will be less worried about their children because they know where they are. Another benefit is when you would like to give a surprise to someone else, it is easier to find him or her, and if it were the case that some relative of yours was traveling and you are worried about this device you can locate it

there are also disadvantages to using RFID chips in people because will be the case that the chip embeds in the walls of your skin also in the same way you do not respect the own space of the person, the worst of all would be that this person finds out that you entered something into his body which is not known if it is completely safe and end up winning you a lawsuit

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Writting n° 2- Araujo Chachico Samira

Use RFID chips for people has some advantages and disadvantages. 

One advantage is that parents will be less worried about their children because they know where they are. Another benefit is when you would like to give a surprise to someone else, it is easier to find him or her, and if it were the case that some relative of yours was traveling and you are worried about this device you can locate it

there are also disadvantages to using RFID chips in people because will be the case that the chip embeds in the walls of your skin also in the same way you do not respect the own space of the person, the worst of all would be that this person finds out that you entered something into his body which is not known if it is completely safe and end up winning you a lawsuit

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Fwd: Writing 1 Rosario Davila Gonzales

Travel to Cusco

First was really excited about traveled to Cusco, because this place is interesting.I had a week to visit this place because I had class in the university.

I worked to pay the trip.

Later my parents gave me some money .Next I traveled first to Lima to take the flight to Cusco.

I was nervous because those days were rainy and the flight had some problems.

Fortunately, we traveled well and we arrived to Cusco.

Then we walked around Machu Picchu and other cities. But when we're going to go back on the airport all the flights were canceled to prevent the possible accidents.

We spent time and we traveled on bus to Puno. Finally we enjoyed a lot. It was a great experience.

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Travel to Cusco

First was really excited about traveled to Cusco, because this place is interesting.I had a week to visit this place because I had class in the university.

I worked to pay the trip.

Later my parents gave me some money .Next I traveled first to Lima to take the flight to Cusco.

I was nervous because those days were rainy and the flight had some problems.

Fortunately, we traveled well and we arrived to Cusco.

Then we walked around Machu Picchu and other cities. But when we're going to go back on the airport all the flights were canceled to prevent the possible accidents.

We spent time and we traveled on bus to Puno. Finally we enjoyed a lot. It was a great experience.

Writing 1 Rosario Davila Gonzales

Travel to Cusco

First was really excited about traveled to Cusco, because this place is interesting.I had a week to visit this place because I had class in the university.

I worked to pay the trip.

Later my parents gave me some money .Next I traveled first to Lima to take the flight to Cusco.

I was nervous because those days were rainy and the flight had some problems.

Fortunately, we traveled well and we arrived to Cusco.

Then we walked around Machu Picchu and other cities. But when we're going to go back on the airport all the flights were canceled to prevent the possible accidents.

We spent time and we traveled on bus to Puno. Finally we enjoyed a lot. It was a great experience.

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Writing 1 

Name: Max Uribe

First. One year ago. I got a part time job. Everyday I went to work early, and un the afternoons I studied. I received a salary every week. Then I kept It in a pocket. Two months later. I had saved a lot of money so, I decides to open a bank account. Next I couldn't work anymore because I didn't have time. After that I had to buy many things for univeristy so, I had to withdraw money. Everyday I removed $50 per day. By the end of the first year. I didn't have any money left on my credit card. Later I was in debt because I didn't have money to deposit. Finally I had to close my account. 

If you openned and account, you needed a permanent job. 

w1 Jennifer Rojas

My new dog 
I always wanted a dog. I will never forget the time when I bought a dog. It was the happiest day of my life because I played with my dog all the afternoon...and then everything went wrong.
Frist of all she started to cry. I tried to calm her down and I fed her. The next morning, I woke up and I saw that all my things were messy. I felt stressed because that day I had many things to do. Later when I wanted to listen to music on my cellphone, I started looking for my headphones but I couldn't find them. Suddenly I realized that my dog had it and she was biting my headphones . Until now she has spolied7 of them.
Two months later my dog got sick. I went to the vet and I spent a lot of money on her medicine. Then, she was urinating everywhere in my house, this was too stressful!
By the end of the first year, a new dog came to my neighborhood. This dog was very egresive and wanted to hit my dog. I didn't know what to do about it. Finally, my dog can now have puppies and that is a big problem because all the dogs chase us when I take her out for a walk. I know it sounds difficult but it's the best thing that could happen to me.

W1: Jennifer Rojas

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Gaspar Vila Angel -writing1 -correction

One of the biggest mistakes I've ever made was buying a dog. I always wanted a dog and thought that having one would be funny. I still remember the day I bought my dog. That day, I was excited....but then everything went wrong.

First of all, I lived in a small house. My house only had four rooms and didn't have free space. When I bought the dog, I didn't know where it would sleep but then I solved the problem.

Next, the other problem was that I studied in the university all the day and the dog stayed in my house all the day, every day of the week. My mother told me:"your dog cries a lot " I thought to make it walk in the park, but I didn't have time.

The next problem was the dog that I bought ate a lot, and I thought that this was a big problem because I didn't have much money to buy his dog food .

My advice about buy a pet is: " Before you have a pet, think twice " 

W1: Yoel Espinoza

Something that I bought and I thought that would be great, was a dog, because I thought that it would be easy to take care of one.

First of all, I bought a dog without thinking about the things that a dog needed. One day, I just saw that dog and I fell in love. Then, I carried him to my house and the dog was really shy. Also he was crying too much. I think that it was because he was a baby and needed his mom. Next, in order to calm the dog, I fed him and he slept for some hours. Later, he woke up and started crying again. It was too noisy. One month later, he grew up and needed a big place to play and enjoy, but I did not have space in my house. Next month, he died, because the dog needed some medication but I could not give those to him.

If you want to buy a pet, you need to have a lot of time to take care of it and money to buy its special food and some medication that the animals need.

WRITING N° 1 - Victoria Mendoza.

When I was a child I wished a barbie but a barbie with a real hair. I still remember the day that I bought my barbie with real hair.

First, I went to the mall and searched where was the barbie. Then, I found the barbie with real hair and I bought her. Two hours later I arrived to my house. The next day, I washed her hair with my shampoo and the hair got sponge.

One month later, when eating my breakfast I put my barbie so close to the kitchen, the barbie took the fire and her hair started to burn in only a few seconds at that moment I discovered that her hair was false and it was a synthetic hair.

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Writing 1 - Lorena Franshesca Huamani del Pozo

First of all, I got tickets for the airplane. I was so scared, because I'd never traveled by airplane, and also the people always said that Mexico is dangerous. Later when I stayed and knew that city and the people who live there. I saw that not the whole city is dangerous, just some places, especially at night. One of the most dangerous places there is "Garibaldi". Finally. I could understand that I can't judge without knowing.

So what's the moral of the history?

" you don't have to judge without knowing.

W 1 - Mayra Clemente

one of the biggest mistakes I've ever made was buy a little dog. I always wanted have a pet and thought that having one would make my life less boring and happier because I would share a bit of my time whit my pet. I still remember the day I bought my little dog that called peluchin, because that day was wonderful

 I went to pets store in the morning search of a dog, that was very easy choose to peluchin because it was a playful and an affectionate puppy so, I loved it immediately. That day was happiest of my life but, then everything became very hard. First of all, I started studying at the university and I didn't have time to care of my puppy as, a small dog requires constant cares so, when I arrived to my house at the night I found all my thing like books very messy, so my mother told me that If you don't know as care a puppy you should give it away someone and I just heard the advice from my mother because I knew that her was right but, I believed that change quickly.

Later, I did know the consequence because peluchin was very depressed and it could not stand being isolated inside of the home because it was a puppy and needed to go out and play all this told us the vet. By in the end I decided give it away it to my neighbour because him had children with them peluchin could play and have a happy life.

So what's the moral of the story? If you don't have time for care someone or share your time you don't should complicate your life and do it do, because you can hurt someone feelings.

Correction Writing N°1 luis alberto piedrihita

One of the biggest mistakes I've ever made was buying a fish.I always wanted a fish but one day i asked my father tu buy a fish then the next day my father gave me the money.He didn't go along with me because he didn't like the animals.Before i buy a fish he told me if the fish die i would eat it.
In that time i felt confused. Finally i decided to keep the money and buy it when i return to huancayo because i was in lima.
In the end i bought the fish but  the next year the fish died because the water wasn't appropriate.

Writing 1 Ricardo Artica Palomino

First of all, when I was a kid. I was in a "piscigranja" with my parents. Then, my father was buying some fishes to cook in my house. I was watching the fishes and later I told my father if I can buy a fish like a pet.

Next, my father bought the fish and I was so happy. When I was a kid, I thought that the fish only needed water and food to live. Finally, I arrived at home with my new pet. Sadly, the poo fish died.

This day I learned that to have a fish you need a machine that produces oxigen in the water and well, it is expensive.