Writing N° 2
Belief: Money makes the world go round
Topic Sententence: Agree
I believe in "money makes the world round" because the economy in the world is based on money. Actually every people need money to buy food, clothes, homes, buildings to have a good and comfortable life.
Today people work only to earn money for example ¿would you work if you have a lot of money? I´m sure most people answered NO .I think people need to work very hard and earn money to buy a car or another things to relax and be happy. The money makes happy people because to do any activities we need money , for example if people have a lot of many , they can travel around the world to relax, no more beggars en the world, people could have the same oportunities with education an health.
Definitely, the money is an important resourse to improve the quality life of the people around the world, but also is necessary remember help people who doesn´t have enought money to eat.
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