Good afternoon teacher , here I send you my writing
WRITING 01
ALLYSON YLANZO SALAS
Studying medicine is not an easy task but is a beautiful and demanding science, because medicine involves studying life, the body and illnesses, to be a doctor you must have many qualities and knowledge.
You have to be persevering and have the ability and willingness to learn everything they teach you, because a doctor never stops studying, you have to be brave and careful, whoever's life will be in your hands,you will also have to choose a specialty, for example, if you want to be a surgeon you will have to get used to seeing from small injuries to the largest, when you do surgeries, or if you want to study pediatrics, you have to be patient and delicate with children at the time of making a revision or applying a vaccine
All doctors have to have a good memory because there are different parts of the body that you have to learn like bones, muscles
Finally, you have to see medicine as a fun job to do, although this will require you a lot of dedication, don't give up and move on, make the most of your time.
Improve punctuation. Sentences end in periods (.) not in commas (,).
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