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My Writing 01 Renzo

Writing 1

Santos Minaya Renzo Piero                                                                         I09


My friend Leonardo wants to study a medicine career, he used to want to be a firefighter but then his father changed his mind about it. I recommend he to don't be afraid of blood, because I used to want to study medicine but I'm afraid of blood, I cant see blood in cut or in surgeries. So he should think about that. At the beginning he was getting used to seeing blood to not be afraid. He would like to be a surgeon as his father and a paramedic as his mom.

Well , whatever, he like it and I told him once to be a pediatrician, now he is decided to be a pediatrician. But that´s all my recommendation for him, he is a nice guy a I believe that he can reach all his goals :3



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1 comment:

  1. OK. Check the following:
    "My friend Leonardo wants to study a medicine career,(P) he used to want to be a firefighter ... I recommend (he to don't)(WF) be afraid of blood, because I used to want to study medicine but I'm afraid of blood, I cant(P) see blood in cut(PL) or in surgeries ..."

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