Hi teacher, I´m Gunter from I09. This is the writing N°2 about and e-mail to my friend:

Hey Juan

 I´am sorry to hear that you broke up with your girlfriend. It must be really hard to overcome because Grecia and you had two years of relationship and it ended yesterday. You must feel terrible because she cheated on you with your best friend Julio. I know you love Greece so much, but it was her decision. Do you still get along with her family? If so, you should talk to her parents about the situation, maybe they can help you overcome this. You know I'm always here for you, you can count on me. I will go to a party this Saturday, if you feel good, you can come with me. Anyway, I will visit you on Monday, if you want I will go with our friends, they hope you can recover from this bad situation. Finally, how do you feel now? You can call me if you want to talk. You are a great friend. Do not give up!                                                                                                               Gunter

Hi teacher, I´m Gunter from I09. This is the writing N°2 about and e-mail to my friend: Hey Juan I´am sorry to hear that you broke up with your girlfriend. It must be really hard to overcome because Grecia and you had two years of relationship and it ended yesterday. You must feel terrible because she cheated on you with your best friend Julio. I know you love Greece so much, but it was her decision. Do you still get along with her family? If so, you should talk to her parents about the situation, maybe they can help you overcome this. You know I'm always here for you, you can count on me. I will go to a party this Saturday, if you feel good, you can come with me. Anyway, I will visit you on Monday, if you want I will go with our friends, they hope you can recover from this bad situation. Finally, how do you feel now? You can call me if you want to talk. You are a great friend. Do not give up!

WRITING 02 - ALLYSON

Hey Mariana,

I am very sorry to hear that, I know that it is difficult for you to study at university, and live without your parent but calm, the university is a very beautiful stage of your life, I completely understand you , I know that there are many subjects in the university, even if you are not with your parents, you must get good grades and hear everything the teachers teach you , this can be very difficult for you, but you have to get used to living alone, you must learn new methods of study, and work very hard, many people do not sleep to do their jobs because is something that they really like, you have to know yourself and discover that talent you have, and what you want to achieve
On the other hand, I know that you feel alone, and for that reason you should socialize more with people, try to relate to others and have a group of friends, this will make you feel better, because they can support you in the most difficult moments of your life

Eat healthy, even if your parents are not there to take care of you, you must calculate the money you have and be more responsible, think about how proud your parents will feel

I wish you good luck, and remember that you should never give up, there will be many difficulties in your life, making mistakes is not bad, but we can learn from mistakes,I will always support you

I will visit you soon.   Allyson

Writing 02

Writing 02

Renzo Piero Santos Minaya                                                                                   I09

 

 

Hi Fabio, I get entered that your parents are getting divorced, I so sorry bro I just want to tell that I´ll be for you 24/7 and that you count with my support.

Remember that friends are the family that one chooses, I know that it should be very hard for you, to think that your parents are not husband and wife, but in this live everyone should be strong, everyone should be brave, because if you already have lived a very difficult situation, it´s a matter of time to overcame it.

Now it can be difficult, we aren´t prepared to afront that situations, try to forget it hanging out with friends and doing what you enjoy, and you will be very resilient.

Well that is all, I know that you can overcame it and don´t forget it, I´ll be there for you when you need it more. 

Libre de virus. www.avast.com

Ashley I09

Ashley I09
Teacher it is my writing 2

Hey Rosa,
Thanks for the e-mail. Sorry to hear you are going through such difficult times. I know that when one ends up with someone, at first it is difficult and sad but you have to remember that being alone can do many things, for example:
You can take a vacation, you can travel to other country.
Honestly, I think Miami would be the best option. This place have a lot of beaches.
If I were you, I would leave immediately but remember to pack some good waterproof clothing if you want to dive. Don't forget that you definitely should block that guy from all your networks.
You have to fun absolutely.
Anyway, if my boss gives me vacations, we go to the party 🎉 wuuu!!!!!! 🥳

Yober Castañeda

Hey Jonathan,

I know you arrived in London and you have some problems. Sorry to hear you are finding it difficult to make friends. You have a lot of friends in Peru, don't you? You could make friends playing soccer because soccer is a popular game in London and you are a fan of Liverpool. It could help you to improve your English too.

You definitely shouldn't get used to waste money on unnecessary things because in London everything is expensive, also your department is small so you need to save money to buy a new department. Sometimes the weather is too cold and sometimes It's too hot. You need a comfortable apartment to study well.  Honestly, you are going to need much money.

The food from London is horrible and you like to cook, don't you? You should look for similar ingredients in the market to cook by yourself. Whatever you cook, it won't be the same like in Peru, that must be really hard but you could save money too.

Things will get better soon and remember, I am coming to see you soon. 

Daniel Velasquez-I09

Hey Alvaro
I read your last e-mail. I am very sorry to hear that you have failed your university entrance, but life will give you more opportunities to reach your goals, I know that you will be able to enter the university. Do not get on your nerves on the day of the exam, feel relaxed and confident that you will do well, I wish you good luck on your exam, because your friends and your family are here to support you in whatever you set. When you need someone to talk, I'll be there to listen to you.

WRITING 2 Vásquez Caicedo Hugo I09

Hey Oscar,

Thanks for the e-mail. Sorry to hear you're finding it difficult to get into that university. 200 questions sounds very difficult.

I know it's not easy to get into that university, but you have to keep studying very hard, you have a lot of intelligent friends that can help you studying. And I think that the exam can be easier than you think, maybe you just have to calm down and concentrate a lot.

Are you still going to that academy? If you're not, maybe that's the reason why all things are more difficult for you, but I know that you will get into that university.

Anyway, can't wait to celebrate for that achievement you will get!          Hugo

WRITING Vásquez Caicedo Hugo I09

I wouldn't take a career in medicine, because it takes a lot of time of studies, its 7 years at university and after that you have to study like 2 more years I think for specialization. In the past I used to like medicine, but now I like engineering. Also I think that when you finish medicine studies, its hard to find a good job, but I am not sure about that.

Writing 2

Dear friend Ayaka
Friend, I know that life can be difficult on occasions but don't give up, difficult moments are passengers, they don't last forever, never give up, go ahead no matter how much you think you won't make it, try and keep trying, never look  behind.  Each decision you make is a new experience, the fact that you have not entered this opportunity to the university, just do not take as a failure and neither that you are less than another person, because God has a different destiny for each one of us.
Be patient everything you crave will come without hurry, we know that you are a person with a big heart, in me you will always have a shoulder where you can cry, in me you will find a friend, a sister, the friendship that unites us is very strong.  Above all, never doubt what you are able of achieving since nothing is impossible, do not let sadness take hold of you, you are very strong and you can overcome this difficulty and any other.
ATTE:BRIGHIT PESSOA

Dear friend Ayaka
Friend, I know that life can be difficult on occasions but don't give up, difficult moments are passengers, they don't last forever, never give up, go ahead no matter how much you think you won't make it, try and keep trying, never look  behind.  Each decision you make is a new experience, the fact that you have not entered this opportunity to the university, just do not take as a failure and neither that you are less than another person, because God has a different destiny for each one of us.
Be patient everything you crave will come without hurry, we know that you are a person with a big heart, in me you will always have a shoulder where you can cry, in me you will find a friend, a sister, the friendship that unites us is very strong.  Above all, never doubt what you are able of achieving since nothing is impossible, do not let sadness take hold of you, you are very strong and you can overcome this difficulty and any other.
ATTE: BRIGHIT PESSOA

                                                                     WRITING N°02

NAME: Luz Comun Ayquipa

I'm very sorry to hear that, but you need to recover soon. I understand that you broke up with your boyfriend. Nonetheless, you still love him with all your heart.

I'm here for you and I'm your best friend. I will help you recover that joy you had before.

For this reason, you need to forget the man who cheated on you and he played with your feelings.

  You must feel terrible to know that important person in your life was laughing behind your back.

Don't cry for him, you are a kind person and I'm sure that, you will easily forget him and you will find a person who values you more than him.

Things will get better soon because nothing is forever and you will see that everything that happened as a nightmare.

BEING SUPPORTIVE (Mirella Sanabria)

PROBLEM: My friend is going to study in other country

Have you thought about how your life would change?  I think you must be feel terrible because when you are in other country, you don't know anyone and all the things like food, people, language are very different from our country. Maybe your parents want a better future for you, I completely understand! but you could study here.

 If you have difficulties, anybody would not help you because your family and your friends are here, you poor thing. But it's your descision, if you think you're going to comply with your goals. Only you have to be responsible and resilient, I hope the things will get better soon. It would be hard but not impossible and you know I'm always here for you .

Re: Writing N° 2

TEACHER THIS IS MY REAL WRITING, DON'T CHECK THE OTHERS PLEASE!! 

Angie Acosta Carrera                             I09

       

Hey Luana, 

I just read your e-mail. Sorry to hear you broke your leg playing soccer. You poor thing! That must be really painful for you, because I know how much you wanted to play with your team in the championship, you must feel terrible. But, will you continue playing soccer after this? 

Anyway, live gives you second chances all time, so don't worry about it, now don't make so much effort with you leg, and some days of therapy, so you can return to play, if you decided it . It is not easy, but I know you are going to overcome this problem. 

If you need something just call me, I'm always here for you. I'm going to travel to visit you! 

Things will get better soon, 

                                                   Angie 

Re: Writing N° 2 CORRECTED

El mar., 24 de septiembre de 2019 9:31 p. m., Angie Acosta <angieacosta.3281@gmail.com> escribió: 

TEACHER THIS IS MY REAL WRITING, DON'T CHECK THE OTHER PLEASE!! 

Angie Acosta Carrera                             I09

       

Hey Luana, 

I just read your e-mail. Sorry to hear you broke your leg playing soccer. You poor tworry That must be really painful for you, because I know how much you wanted to play with your team in the championship, you must feel terrible. But, will you continue playing playing soccer after this? 

Anyway, live gives you second chances all time, so don't worry about it, now don't make so much effort with you leg, and some days of therapy, so you can return to play, if you decided it . It not easy, but I know you are going to overcome this problem. 

If you need something just call me, I'm always here for you. I'm going to travel to visit you! 

Things will get better son, 

                                                   Angie 

Writing N° 2

Angie Acosta Carrera                             I09

       

Hey Luana, 

I just read your e-mail. Sorry to hear you broke your leg playing soccer. You poor tworry That must be really painful for you, because I know how much you wanted to play with your team in the championship, you must feel terrible. Just one thing, live gives you second chances all time, so don't worry about it, now don't make so much effort with you leg, if you need something just call me 

writing 2 Carlos

Hi dear cousin
I heard that you don't have good grades at school and that you have problems with your girlfriend.
I can't visit you right now because I have to study, but I wanted to tell you that
I was also in a similar situation last year and I did it thanks to my girlfriend because she was the one who inspired me to study more.
My advice would be that if she does not do the same with you that is not love, in that case you would have to break up with her
and look for someone who really helps you in the good and bad moments and not only when things are good, in these In cases you need people who support you
not to give you more problems as your lover is doing now that instead of helping you solve your problem she is one more.

Writing Nº2 Maria Fernanda Ramon Escobal I09

Writing Nº2

Hey Lucrecia.

Thanks for the e-mail. Sorry to hear you broke up with your boyfriend, that must be really hard, but remember that life goes on and he is not the only person in the world. Also I think that you must feel really terrible because you didn't enter the University, but don't worry, you are young yet and I think if you study you will succeed in the next exam.

I have good news for you, my cousin is going to move to Lima and I have to tell you that he is really handsome and the best thing is that he is single and also I told him some things about you and he is really exited to meet you.

Don't worry Lucrecia the next admission test is going to be soon and I am really sure that you will enter.

 

Finally don't forget that I love you and I am always here for you.        Mafer 

writing 1 Carlos

Well, the first advice I would give you is that you would have to start reading because you have to get used to reading because if you want to
study medicine you must love books, this will be your faithful companion in the university and in the near and distant future, your books will be the only friends who will accompany you until your death.
Another requirement is that you have to be patient because in a surgery every moment is important. You also have to be empathic with your
patients and imagine that your patients are your parents, so you would take care of them as if they were part of your family.
Finally, if someone tells you that you will not succeed, just reply that you will take good care of him when he comes to your office.

writing 1 Carlos

Well, the first advice I would give you is that you would have to start reading because you have to get used to reading because if you want to study medicine you must love books, this will be your faithful companion in the university and in the near future.  Another requirement is that you have to be patient because in a surgery every moment is important. You also have to be empathic with your patients and imagine that your patients are your parents, so you would take care of them as if they were part of your family.  Finally, if someone tells you that you will not succeed, just reply that you will take good care of him when he comes to your office.

Writing N° 1

Angie Acosta Carrera                                                I09 

                          ADVICE TO STUDY MEDICINE

In our country, medicine is one of the most difficult careers to enter, also most of students want to study this career, since it is like a challenge that most want to achieve. So, if you want to study it, I'm going to give some you advices to do a successful work in this career. First, leave the perfectionism, one thing that many students do is to compare their results with others, having negative thoughts and gradually leaving aside the optimism with which they started, you have to know that you are a person and probably you can make some mistakes, but you will learn, you will have second chances, and the most important thing you have to enjoy when you help people, because that is what a doctor do, so don't worry about it. Then, you have to be used to retain all kinds of information on a temporary basis, since the first introductory courses are anatomy and biology, that are hard at the begging, in which you must memorize a lot of essential information about the human body, if it's not the case, you have to get used to using more scientific terms, because medicine works a lot with science and it's a little bit difficult to understand if you don't know well some terms. Other advice, do an schedule, medicine it's a demanding career anywhere, so you have to be organized with your classes, your time to study and the time to get relax, because a doctor's schedule it's full of appointmens, surgeries and many things that a a doctor do, also you have to take care of your health, sometimes you won't have time to eat or sleep, studying medicine requires a lot of effort and dedication. You will go through moments of stress that can affect your health. Take care of your health based on a healthy diet, exercising and learn a disconnect and clear yourself when you have free time. If you have a bad schedule or you don't have one, you may feel very bad and you decide that medicine isn't a course for you, so you leave the career affecting all the years of study and the economy of your parents, that isn't a good idea. Also, don't miss any class, in medicine all the classes are important, because if you miss one of them, you won't know this topic, and it's will affect in your final exams, or when you start to work, for example, you miss the immunology class, where you learn, what vaccination or antibiotic, somebody needs if this person has an special kind of disease. Finally, and the most important, enjoy your career, being a good doctor is a commitment to yourself and to society, even though it demands a lot of sacrifice. To become it you have to give your best. The beauty of studying this career is that it gives you the chance to save and improve the lives of others. Enjoy learning, even after having time to think about salary and other rewards. Remember that medicine is not usually a poorly paid profession. Remember that your greatest reward will be to make others happy. 

Fwd: Writing N° 1

---------- Forwarded message ---------
De: Angie Acosta <angieacosta.3281@gmail.com>
Date: mié., 18 de septiembre de 2019 5:12 p. m.
Subject: Writing N° 1
To: <aariosvel.int09@bloggler.com>

Angie Acosta Carrera                       I09 

           ADVICE TO STUDY MEDICINE

In our country, medicine is one of the most difficult careers to enter, also most of students want to study this career, since it is like a challenge that most want to achieve. So, if you want to study it, I'm going to give some you advices to do a successful work in this career. First, leave the perfectionism, one thing that many students do is to compare their results with others, having negative thoughts and gradually leaving aside the optimism with which they started, you have to know that you are a person and probably you can make some mistakes, but you will learn, you will have second chances, and the most important thing you have to enjoy when you help people, because that is what a doctor do, so don't worry about it. Then, you have to be used to retain all kinds of information on a temporary basis, since the first introductory courses are anatomy and biology, that are hard at the begging, in which you must memorize a lot of essential information about the human body, if it's not the case, you have to get used to using more scientific terms, because medicine works a lot with science and it's a little bit difficult to understand if you don't know well some terms. Other advice, do an schedule, medicine it's a demanding career anywhere, so you have to be organized with your classes, your time to study and the time to get relax, because a doctor's schedule it's full of appointmens, surgeries and many things that a a doctor do, also you have to take care of your health, sometimes you won't have time to eat or sleep, studying medicine requires a lot of effort and dedication. You will go through moments of stress that can affect your health. Take care of your health based on a healthy diet, exercising and learn a disconnect and clear yourself when you have free time. If you have a bad schedule or you don't have one, you may feel very bad and you decide that medicine isn't a course for you, so you leave the career affecting all the years of study and the economy of your parents, that isn't a good idea. Also, don't miss any class, in medicine all the classes are important, because if you miss one of them, you won't know this topic, and it's will affect in your final exams, or when you start to work, for example, you miss the immunology class, where you learn, what vaccination or antibiotic, somebody needs if this person has an special kind of disease. Finally, and the most important, enjoy your career, being a good doctor is a commitment to yourself and to society, even though it demands a lot of sacrifice. To become it you have to give your best. The beauty of studying this career is that it gives you the chance to save and improve the lives of others. Enjoy learning, even after having time to think about salary and other rewards. Remember that medicine is not usually a poorly paid profession. Remember that your greatest reward will be to make others happy. 

Fwd: ADVICE FOR MEDICINE STUDENT

---------- Forwarded message ---------
De: Mirella Noelia Sanabria Benito <noeliperu13@gmail.com>
Date: jue., 19 sept. 2019 a las 16:59
Subject: ADVICE FOR MEDICINE STUDENT by Mirella
To: <aariosvel.int09@blogger.com>

Nowadays many people want to study medicine, but you have to know that this career is not easy because you are going to study a lot specially anatomy and biology. I remember when I was a child I used to played with my cousins, we were as a doctor and I liked to do that but now I feel nervous when I see blood a lot, so in my opinion you are brave and courageous because you could help people and if you heal a sick man, you'd be his hero.

 I have a brother, he is studying medicine and for him it's difficult, so my advice for you will be that you have to have a schedule. If show up an obstacle don't be worry because it is normal you could learn more  and you will become in a good professional, be resilient you can. To learn more easy you could create your own methods. I hope you'll a excellent doctor.  

ADVICE FOR MEDICINE STUDENT

Nowadays many people want to study medicine, but you have to know that this career is not easy because you are going to study a lot specially anatomy and biology. I remember when I was a child I used to played with my cousins, we were as a doctor and I liked to do that but now I feel nervous when I see blood a lot, so in my opinion you are brave and courageous because you could help people and if you heal a sick man, you'd be his hero.

 I have a brother, he is studying medicine and for him it's difficult, so my advice for you will be that you have to have a schedule. If show up an obstacle don't be worry because it is normal you could learn more  and you will become in a good professional, be resilient you can. To learn more easy you could create your own methods. I hope you'll a excellent doctor.  

Writing 01 Fabrizio Paucar

Well, the first advice that I would give to you is that you would have to start reading  because you have to get use to reading because if you want to study medicine you have to love the books, it will be your partner in the college and in the near future he would have to read a lot to pass your exams.
It is just one of the requirements if you want to be a doctor, another requirement is that you have to be patient. Also you would have to imagine that your patients are your parents in this way you would take care of them as they were part of your family.
You will have to strive to achieve your goals.

Fwd: Writing N° 1

---------- Forwarded message ---------
De: Angie Acosta <angieacosta.3281@gmail.com>
Date: mié., 18 de septiembre de 2019 5:12 p. m.
Subject: Writing N° 1
To: <aariosvel.int09@bloggler.com>

Angie Acosta Carrera                       I09 

           ADVICE TO STUDY MEDICINE

In our country, medicine is one of the most difficult careers to enter, also most of students want to study this career, since it is like a challenge that most want to achieve. So, if you want to study it, I'm going to give some you advices to do a successful work in this career. First, leave the perfectionism, one thing that many students do is to compare their results with others, having negative thoughts and gradually leaving aside the optimism with which they started, you have to know that you are a person and probably you can make some mistakes, but you will learn, you will have second chances, and the most important thing you have to enjoy when you help people, because that is what a doctor do, so don't worry about it. Then, you have to be used to retain all kinds of information on a temporary basis, since the first introductory courses are anatomy and biology, that are hard at the begging, in which you must memorize a lot of essential information about the human body, if it's not the case, you have to get used to using more scientific terms, because medicine works a lot with science and it's a little bit difficult to understand if you don't know well some terms. Other advice, do an schedule, medicine it's a demanding career anywhere, so you have to be organized with your classes, your time to study and the time to get relax, because a doctor's schedule it's full of appointmens, surgeries and many things that a a doctor do, also you have to take care of your health, sometimes you won't have time to eat or sleep, studying medicine requires a lot of effort and dedication. You will go through moments of stress that can affect your health. Take care of your health based on a healthy diet, exercising and learn a disconnect and clear yourself when you have free time. If you have a bad schedule or you don't have one, you may feel very bad and you decide that medicine isn't a course for you, so you leave the career affecting all the years of study and the economy of your parents, that isn't a good idea. Also, don't miss any class, in medicine all the classes are important, because if you miss one of them, you won't know this topic, and it's will affect in your final exams, or when you start to work, for example, you miss the immunology class, where you learn, what vaccination or antibiotic, somebody needs if this person has an special kind of disease. Finally, and the most important, enjoy your career, being a good doctor is a commitment to yourself and to society, even though it demands a lot of sacrifice. To become it you have to give your best. The beauty of studying this career is that it gives you the chance to save and improve the lives of others. Enjoy learning, even after having time to think about salary and other rewards. Remember that medicine is not usually a poorly paid profession. Remember that your greatest reward will be to make others happy. 

WRITING 01- ALLYSON

Good afternoon teacher , here I send you my writing

WRITING 01

ALLYSON YLANZO SALAS 

Studying medicine is not an easy task but is a  beautiful and demanding science, because medicine involves studying life, the body and illnesses, to be a doctor you must have many qualities and knowledge.

You have to be persevering and have the ability and willingness to learn everything they teach you, because a doctor never stops studying, you have to be brave and careful, whoever's life will be in your hands,you will also have to choose a specialty, for example, if you want to be a surgeon you will have to get used to seeing from small injuries to the largest, when you do surgeries, or if you want to study pediatrics, you have to be patient and delicate with children at the time of making a revision or applying a vaccine

 All doctors have to have a good memory because there are different parts of the body that you have to learn like bones, muscles

Finally, you have to see medicine as a fun job to do, although this will require you a lot of dedication, don't give up and move on, make the most of your time.

Yober Castañeda

Dear Maria.

Your mother told me you wanted to study medicine and I want to give you some advice. You do not like to wake up early but when you're in the university, sometimes you couldn't sleep because you will study all night. You don't like read, do you? You will read many books so you have to get used to reading all the time. You are not coward, aren't you? I tell you that because you will see organs, blood or injuries so you must be really brave. I think you will get used to seeing all those things. When I was a child, I used to think about studying medicine but It is not my vocation, in fact, I have been studying architecture. It's a completely different career. Medicine is your vocation, isn't it? But If you don't like, you could choose another career.

My best wishes.

By: Yober

Fwd: MY ADVICE

---------- Forwarded message ---------
De: luz comun ayquipa <lucicomunayquipa@gmail.com>
Date: mar., 17 sept. 2019 a las 10:33
Subject: MY ADVICE
To: <aariosvel.int09@blogger.com>

GIVING ADVICE

Choosing a career well is important because then there will be no going back and with that career, you can start working or you can start your work life. It's necessary what you really want to do.

With the medicine career, you will be the opportunity to support many people on health issues.

The medicine career is easy but each person puts the difficulty to do. That's why It's necessary to be positive. All the things will depend on the challenge that one person assume in life with visions towards the future.

To get it, you have to put a lot of effort. Every obstacle you have will become an excellent professional. With this obstacle, you can learn to develop you.

Whatever you do, don't rush into a decision. You must enjoy studying because there will be unforgettable moments.

LUZ COMUN AYQUIPA

WRITING 1

       ARE YOU STUDYING MEDICINE?

When you study medicine or if you finished the college and you are a doctor, it is possible that you have some requirements to be successful.
In addition, you.could follow some pieces of advice to be better.
First, you must be patient. If you treat someone, you would be able to hear their inconvinience        and try to help them. On the other hand, as you are studying medicine, you.must be patient because career takes a lot of time, more than 10 years, but at the end it will be rewarded.
Second, you must be perseverantwgen you deal with a problem. If you treat someone with a very hard illness you should keep calm and do the best to discover the way to help she or he.
Deal with a problem could be difficult but not impossible.
Finally, you must have determination, If you go to your intership, you have to do everything because you want to be the best. Everything in this life is well done, If you do it with passion. If your teacher command you to do something, do more than it, your knowledge will increase.  

                                         By: Brighit Pessoa

Writing

Well, the first advice that I would give to you is that he would have to start to read  because you have to get use to reading because if you want to study medicine you have to love the books, it will be your partner in the college and in the near future he would have to read a lot to pass your exams.
It is just one of the requirements if you want to be a doctor, another requirement is that you have to be patient. Also you would have to imagine that your patients are your parents in this way you would take care of them as they were part of your family.
You will have to strive to achieve your goals.

Fwd: ADVICE TO STUDY MEDICINE Mirella Sanabria

---------- Mensaje reenviado ----------
De: "Mirella Noelia Sanabria Benito" <noeliperu13@gmail.com>
Fecha: 17/09/2019 15:04
Asunto: ADVICE TO STUDY MEDICINE
Para: <aariosvel.int09@blogger.com>
Cc:

Many people want to study medicine but few of them can become in a good doctor, when you start to study medicine may you will find some difficulties because study   anatomy and biology are complicated. In my opinion to be a doctor is only for brave people because they are getting used to treat wounds and sick people. Also you have to think about people's healthy because you would be a hero for them if you cure their diseases.

Re: Writing 01- INTERMEDIATE

Would you take a career in medicine?

If you accept this, you should know all subjects to apply for a university, especially being very good in anatomy, biology and chemistry. Within the university you should get used to carrying difficult subjects, you must get used to keeping awake studying. When you graduate, you should be tolerant of your patients, if they have any questions try to answer in the best way. Be a good coworker like nurses and cleaning staff. Wherever you work, you should work of the best way. You will get used to prescribe medicine, vaccinate people, take someone's temperature, make prescriptions and operate people. If you choose this race, good luck and have fun.

El mar., 17 de sep. de 2019 3:07 p. m., Daniel Velasquez De la cruz <danielvelasquezdelacruz@gmail.com> escribió:

DANIEL VELASQUEZ DE LA CRUZ

My Writing 01 Renzo

Writing 1

Santos Minaya Renzo Piero                                                                         I09

My friend Leonardo wants to study a medicine career, he used to want to be a firefighter but then his father changed his mind about it. I recommend he to don't be afraid of blood, because I used to want to study medicine but I'm afraid of blood, I cant see blood in cut or in surgeries. So he should think about that. At the beginning he was getting used to seeing blood to not be afraid. He would like to be a surgeon as his father and a paramedic as his mom.

Well , whatever, he like it and I told him once to be a pediatrician, now he is decided to be a pediatrician. But that´s all my recommendation for him, he is a nice guy a I believe that he can reach all his goals :3

Like if you see this :3

Advice by Ashley I09

Good afternoon teacher

My advice if you want to study the medicine is that you need a lot patience because, there are people who have a complicated character so whichever technique you use, your patient has to feel good.
One day I remember that when I went to the hospital, there was a doctor who always treated his patients badly and for that reason I used to search another doctor.
Also you need to study hard.
You need know all the name of antibiotics.
You have to know how to put vaccines and everything related to the human body. Then you go to work overtime always
For example, my uncle is a doctor and he is getting used to working long hours.
Finally however much you have to complications you have to save your patient so, if I were you I would think twice. 😉

ADVICE TO STUDY MEDICINE

Many people want to study medicine but few of them can become in a good doctor, when you start to study medicine may you will find some difficulties because study   anatomy and biology are complicated. In my opinion to be a doctor is only for brave people because they are getting used to treat wounds and sick people. Also you have to think about people's healthy because you would be a hero for them if you cure their diseases.

Writing 01- INTERMEDIATE

DANIEL VELASQUEZ DE LA CRUZ

MY ADVICE

GIVING ADVICE

Choosing a career well is important because then there will be no going back and with that career, you can start working or you can start your work life. It's necessary what you really want to do.

With the medicine career, you will be the opportunity to support many people on health issues.

The medicine career is easy but each person puts the difficulty to do. That's why It's necessary to be positive. All the things will depend on the challenge that one person assume in life with visions towards the future.

To get it, you have to put a lot of effort. Every obstacle you have will become an excellent professional. With this obstacle, you can learn to develop you.

Whatever you do, don't rush into a decision. You must enjoy studying because there will be unforgettable moments.

Writing Nº1 I09 Maria Fernanda Ramon Escobal

Some tips for people that want to study or study medicine

First, you need to study a lot because  our body has different types of muscle tissues, skin layers, bones, tendons, etc. Then you need to have passion for what you do and enjoy helping people. It is also necessary that you get up early to do a good job, have a lot of experience with young people, the elderly and children.

If we talk about studies and practices, but you feel nervous, the best thing you can do is to breathe deeply, if you are disgusted to see corpses it´s better to try to drink water and eat something in front of them so that you have a habit.

Never forget that you have to be persevering and very confident in yourself because you will always find yourself in difficult situations, for example in a surgery, it is not easy but if you know that you will success ,it will be easy for you.

Well in my case I will never get used to getting up very early, studying enough biology, and doing very complicated surgeries.

Finally I wish you the best and a successful career.